Writing a song

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Hello Guys,

I need to write a song for tomorrow's class and sing it. But I am having a hard time writing a lyrics. So, I want you all to add a line to my lyrics. Just a line and I want to see how it works out. I shall give the first line and you all can add whateverr you want. Hope this turns out to be an OK lyrics :)

"Letter to you" (lets assume this is the title. But it does not matter. we will see how the whole lyrics turns out and later change the topic)

Cacophonix

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Where's the first line?

Oh_Gaathe

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I'm writing this letter to you
From my heart with a feeling do true ....

Oh_Gaathe

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*so

Pokhrelikanchi

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English or nepali?

Oh_Gaathe

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English

Anava

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I guess you meant " feeling so true"

Anava

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I'm writing this letter to you
From my heart with a feeling so true
Through my eyes with so many dreams of ours
N i hope you take my words as flowers...

Oh_Gaathe

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Thanks anava

this is I got so far... further help is appreciated

"Letter to you"

When I first saw you at the Journal Square
The wind was blowing through your long dark hair
I could just stare while everything went blur
Seeing how picture perfect you were

When I just started talking to you
You were more than a beautiful view
THe smile and the glitter in your eyes
Made all these moments worth a while

So,
I am writing this letter to you
From my heart with these feelings so true
Trying to unveil how my crush finally grew
TO an emotion that I never knew

I am trying to find two more verses after this. but still stuck.

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