E-LOVE IN SAJHA: SOMEDAY I SHALL BUY YOU A PIZZA (FINAL PART)

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serial

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Such a nice story. Loved it.

Now I am wondering who this Angelina is

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robben_mas

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was really interesting....................

one that got away

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"A man always wants to see his mother in his woman, except that he wants to sleep with the latter."

i am more than positive that behoove brother has pulled this story off magnificiantly overall but i couldnt go past this line. i just could not. i dont know whats wrong with it but it kind of grossed me out !

behoove_me

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Last edited: 25-Jan-12 11:10 AM

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An eye catching read indeed.

I could not stop commenting on the use of word "circa".
In my field and as far as I know, the word is used either for the range of time or if specific year is used , for the year that passed long ago, like "circa 1900", "Circa 1950" or even "circa 1980", It is my underrstanding that people dont use "circa" for recent time.

PS. I am neither english major/minor nor a literature expert.Comment is based on use of the word in my field and my understanding only.

lamopuri

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fabulous story but quite disappointing end. I would love to know what happened next!

goenkaraj

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I am not sure if this is a story or a real life drama....

If it is a story then Bravo!!! You indeed have a way of putting life into words...

However, if this is real, Shame on you!!! Did I read it right? Go over it again and make sure everyone knows he mentioned being married and loving some unidentified girl....

Don't get me wrong, just saying what i felt!

behoove_me

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camerapicture

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Preety engaging story. Loved the ending part :)

I was confused whether the wifey was Nepali or of other nationality because she didn't cook all the delicacies and only high carb food. Later i read she was in nepal with kids for the holidays. Well just a query.

behoove_me

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Poonte

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Yes, behoobhe, you can still find me here! Pathetic, indeed, isn't it?

Not a pizza, but the promise to buy you a drink still stands -- though I may have to do cheers with a glass of water. Believe it!

Excellent read, as always! And dare I confess...the story sure does resonate with ......!

dipika02

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Behoove_me,

You are one of the gifted writers and there is no doubt on that. The thouroughness is something I admire most in your writings. Your writings are creative (eg. "Empire State of Teej"), unique (eg. "VISIT NEPAL: FIFTEEN YEARS LATER" ) and distinctive which can easily grab a reader's attention within literary terms.

Kudos to your work.....

Stat

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OMG, How did you know my/our story?

I rarely read english stories but after she (my "Miss Stranger") emailed me that our story is on Sajha, I am shocked and it totally drove me back to those days. Thank you Behoove_me.

Anyway great writing, enjoyed both parts.

edipre

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@ Behoove_Me : Great again.Also I read "Empire State of Teej" - it's great too.I liked the way you have portrayed things like, Wine opening,got off from train just for the sake of DSLR etc.

Keep writing dude.

rahashya

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Once again back with the bang....As always enjoyed your story

alche

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YOU SIR, ARE THE REASON, I FEEL LIKE PEEKING AT THIS WEBSITE EVERY NOW AND THEN. fabulous writing man.....

halo

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Superb.

behoove_me

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LOVEMOMO

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behoove>>>>>> very nice story and your dream man but where are the previous chapter ? I really like to read all episod of your story , could i get the link for it . than you.

behoove_me

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LOVEMOMO

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Thanks a lotlotlotlot>>>>I really enjoying reading it bro. coments later

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