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हिमालको ठाडो शिर झुक्दैछ अचेल
बुद्धका दुई आँखा रसाउदैछ  अचेल

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बन्दुकको पो बोलबाला चल्दैछ  अचेल

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Last edited: 29-Aug-09 07:50 AM
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सल्लाह र सुझाबको अपेक्षा गर्दछु।
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अनुप्रासमा सम्झौता नगरिदिएको भए राम्रो हुन्थ्यो कि!
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FYI,


उर्दु गजलमा प्रचलित केही बहर (छन्द) हरु: 


संकेत:

I = ह्रस्व = क, कि, कु

S = दीर्घ = का, की, कू, के, कै, कम्, क:


 


 

(1) मुतकारिब (12 अक्षर)


ISS ISS ISS ISS


 


(2.1) हजज (16 अक्षर)


ISSS ISSS ISSS ISSS


 


(2.2) हजज (अस्तर) (12 अक्षर)


SISS SS SS ISIS


 


(2.3) हजज (मुसम्मन मकबुज) (16 अक्षर)


ISIS ISIS ISIS ISIS


 


(2.4) हजज (भेद) (11 अक्षर)


ISSS ISSS ISS


 


(3) रजज (15 अक्षर)


IISIS IISIS IISIS


 


(4.1) रमल (16 अक्षर)


SISS SISS SISS SISS


 


(4.2) रमल-2 (11 अक्षर)


SISS SISS ISS


 


(4.3) रमल-3 (10 अक्षर)


SISS ISSS SS


 


(4.4) रमल-4 (11 अक्षर)


SISS SISS SIS


 


(4.5) रमल-5 (14 अक्षर)


ISIS IISS ISIS SS


 


(4.6) रमल-6 (14 अक्षर)


SISS IISS IISS SS


 



(5.1) मुतदारिक (12 अक्षर)


SIS SIS SIS SIS


(स्रग्विणी छन्द)


 


(5.2) मुतदारिक-2 (24 अक्षर)


SIS SIS SIS SIS SIS SIS SIS SIS


 


(6) कामिल (15 अक्षर)


IISIS IISIS IISIS


 


(7) वाफिर (20 अक्षर)


ISISS ISISS ISISS ISISS


 


(8) मुज्तस (16 अक्षर)


ISSS IISS ISSS IISS


 


_____________________


 


source: बहरमाला

Last edited: 28-Aug-09 12:33 PM
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भनेपछी चल्दैछ र भौतरिदैछ हुनु पर्‍यो हैन त दाई।।। मैले याद नै गरेन छु। धन्यवाद।
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