The Fortune Teller

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lol very nice but am still confused is it your personal experience or just a imaginary story... i thought it was personal until the waiter part... what guy will say that to a girl unless the girl is arrogant or ugly. anyways in both cases its nice... looking forward for the climax....

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ritthe

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Me too Chhetrini

fanatic

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Did the fortune teller told you that you will write the first part of your story and forget to post the rest?
anyways looking forward for the rest of the story...cheers

ctal

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very interesting. waiting for another part.

truthspeaker

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Gaffai hanyo sathi le......................haha...tara mazako gaff thiyo

ascian soul

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Hey Fortune if u r not going to write any more you can just post as "I quit"

lostinusa

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Ok go get some water and start writing agian............................

Dalli Resham

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come on!!!! I have been waiting for teh second part like every one else. Kati bhau khojeko hola!!!!

Ved555

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OK I QUIT

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First of sorry for keeping all of you waiting for such a long time. Actually there were many ups and downs in my life and I couldn't finish it in time. Anyways, the wait is finally over and the second (last) part goes like this...

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Nice

ctal

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la la congratulaitons. gajab ko rahechha your love story designed by your own mom. btw, did you ask Kirti if she went to the restaurant after she learned that you were going there? did she intensionally asked you for some water or she did not knew you until then and just thought you were a waiter there?

ritthe

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Couldn't believe it was all pre-planned. Sweet, short and simply narrated story. Congrats man !

Grace_S

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Hahaha, what a twist and an interesting read! :)

amitraja

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You are not a fortune teller but a good story teller

I like it waiting for another one hopefully very soon

ascian soul

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Hey man do u write movie scripts ?
Any ways a fine story, i was

surprised for its ending.

khushii

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nice story with a happy ending!

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*****

perfectionist

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hahaha.. baireko katha padhera chassa bhaa thyo.. yo padhera hasyo.. khitka chodera..

esto dhilo garna bhayena.. anywayz.. i hope n pray everything is all well with ur life now! take care

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perfectionist