ए हो त म नि तो सपै गुनासोहरु फुकाउँदै जाँदा दोश्रो टुक्रोको बयान गर्नै बिर्सेछु नि! हरिप छ !

अनि दीपले देखा खालि ठाम नि बिर्सेछु कठै सुद्धि मेरो!

अब नाम नै भेटेकोछैन भनेर --- क्यो किसिका दिल का भर्ता बनारहे हो भै, अब फटाक से बोल भि दो कौन हे वो "यु"  

I am in deep love with myself ni  -- shiv shiv ab unpe kya gujregaa jo ap ka kabita padhpadh ke aas lagae baithey they.

Dipika,

Hajur ka ti mithaa sabda haru ko lagi muri muri dhanyabad ani aabhar byakta gardachhu.

जिम्माल बा,

हजुर लाई पनि हरिप लागेको सुन्दा हर्षले गद-गद भए म।

Pjna

हम क्या किसी के दिल को भरता बनाए; जब कोइ और हमरा दिल का भरता बना रहा हो।   जिस्के लिए वह लब्ज लिखा था, वह तो किसी और कि हो गइ। हाए रे मेरी फुटी किस्मत।

Nepche bro this one is too good, Nepali hos ya English dubai lekhne bro le..I heard very soon u will write something in French LOL

I love this v much

You are the twinkle in my eyes,
and the smiles on my face.
You are the warmth inside my heart,
and every beat of its pace.

कबिता हरु राम्रा गए। मन छुने, दिल  छुने, नबसेकै पिरती पनि उसै मौलाएर आऊला झैं। अब नेप्चे गुरुको के कुरा गराइ भो र, नेपाली पनि छुन्ना, अंग्रेजिको त गुरु भाईगए।

सबै वार्तालाप हरु पढियो, एउटै कुरो बिझायो; हैन त्यो सुन्तलिको बिहे को संग भयो भन्या जिम्माल बा, सुन्तले त यता जिउदै छ त। के सुन्नु पर्या यो कानले, कलिजुग।

सुन्तलिको बिहे भकभके संग भयो are surnatal ji

[sorry hai Nkchora for messing up your nice thread ]

Amazing bro,

Thank you very much. I feel accomplished that everyone who read, liked it. Nepali or english ta, jun language ma mood chalchha, tesai ma lekhidine ho re kya.  LOL...french re feri..no way. I don't even want to recall those 3 months when I was trying to learn a b c of french couple of years ago.

सुन्तले ज्यु, 

लौ न नी, म अङ्रेजी को गुरु चाइ परीन है। जिन्दगीमा कहिले बोर्डिङ स्कुलको दैलामा पाइला त हाल्न पाइएन। हजुरको नेपाली को अगाडी त मेरो नेपाली को के कुरा गराइ भयो र?  तर ति गुलिया शब्दहरु को लागी भने म हजुर को आभारी भए।

अनी ए रातै सुन्तली को बिहे भकभके सँग पो भएछ।  हाम्रो सुन्तलेजी को बर्बाद नै पो हुने भो त। अब त्यो भकभके शाहरुक खान नै हो भने त ठेगाना त पक्कै मुम्बई तिरको होला क्या रे।

nepal ko chhora,

ramro lagyo malai ta mama(i think u remember that in brt thread we became mama-bhanji). keep going.

Ohoo Manshree Bhanji,

I am glad that you liked the poem. Yes, I do remember you from that thread. You seem busy these days...haven't seen u here for while. Hope things are well at your side.

Hey man,

This "YOU" can apply to anybody. So, if you think it suits well with your "YOU", then feel free dude.

nkc bro, daaammiii chha yaar----- who is "You" bro? --"Na tum jaano na hum"---chai nabham hai

tyo suntale ke bus ta yeha po aayipugechha  ma ta muglin ma kurdai ka hairaan-----bemani  birkhe pani yehi aayipugecha--

Kalejo bro,

Bro lai daami lageko sunda malai pani khusi lagyo. Lau na..who is "You" re feri.   Jun "You" ko lagi bhanera yo poem lekheko the, tyo "You" lai ta aba bhauju namaste bhannu parne bhai sakyo.

Cerine,

Thank you very much for the comment.

WOW!!!!
Awesommmmmeeeee........ da! major change garera literature rakhne ki?  ;)

Great piece. Would love to read more of your poems.

"Jun "You" ko lagi bhanera yo poem lekheko the, tyo "You" lai ta aba bhauju namaste bhannu parne bhai sakyo." Sorry to hear that ( if you are serious).

" म त एक्लो, साथी भन्नु त मेरै सास थियो।
तर हृदय मा भने केवल तिम्रो नै बास थियो।"

You are all I’ve dreamed of,
you are all my deed.
You are all I’ve wanted,
you are all I need.

Ma kun sabda le tarif garu khoi!!  Kabita ra poetry duitai Attttiiiii ramra chhan. Tarif garna suhaune sabda nai bhetina, Jun sabda samjhiyo fikka lagchha.  

Ma yaha bata "Standing Aviation" di ra chhu hai...