My Soliloquy

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mcmxc Ji, excellent one! Very nice story; hope we get to read the next part soon. Thanks a lot for devoting your time to present such a wonderful story to readers..

kalejo

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kancha bro u came here without letting me know chill bro chill it's alrite ma man

mcmxc, excellent write up, I enjoyed reading each line. I am eager to read more.

kancha01

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kalejo, good to see you man. you must have had a wonderful holiday.. by the way, happy new year yaar

wow.nepal

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mcmxc, good one! can't wait for rest of the part.

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"I namasted aunty and hurriedly left, without looking back. Such a tragedy. Dead are long gone and alive die with them everyday."

mcmxc, wow very nicely presented the concoction of grief and sting. yes, can't wait to read the remaining part.

mcmxc

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Thank you kancha01, Kalejo, wow-nepal and dipika02!!!

I appreciate your time to read the story. I agree I am not very adept at making interesting snippets and anecdotes for a more enjoyable read, but it is my first attempt in fiction. So, I am sure I can be excused for any errors, structural and conceptual.

I am still editing the 2nd half. Only that I have a problem, should I make it a happy ending as we would like to see it, or let it be, as it would have been. I would like your inputs to that.

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