A Story..

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crazy_love

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OMG Nepal ko chora,

kasto tragic story. real ho?

lau na, malai ta kasto maya lagyo dubaiko...

pjna007

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1^st I thought itâ€™s a story.

2^nd did you write it ? ( of course you did what a fool) youâ€™r possessed of bahumukhi pratiba nkchora.

3^{rd and last}sad but nice poem.. reminded me of a Victorian poem â€œlady of shalottâ€

write more!

dipika02

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nepal ko chora,

A sad story but so nicely described and sketched. I felt sorry for both.

sndy

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NKC, wow, that's such a beautiful poem. A sad one but beautifully written.

waiyat

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We dun need more words to describe a story , some few words steals the show . Good one!!

Nepal ko chora

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CL,

Fortunately, it's not real...just an imagination..

Pjna007,

Thanks for the complement. The poem is inspired from "Romeo and Juliet".

Dipika02, Sndy and Waiyat,

Thank you very much for the comments.

angeleyes

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i ve read this before

long time.

Nepal ko chora

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Angeleyes ("Bhanji"), You must have read it at my "facebook" note then .. lol

Rythm

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Wow, this is a real nice and wonderful read! Loved it. My first thought was, he probably copied it from somewhere because the poem flows and conveys the whole story in a few words! Very well done sir, please write more.

Nepal ko chora

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Rhytm,

I would try my best to justify your praise in my other ramblings too. I am inbedted for the compliment from one of the best story-tellers from sajha... Haven't read any story from you for a while...hope you soon come up with a bang.

angeleyes

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ohhh hahaha

uncle

thats why i was like

nepal ko chora didnt really come to me as you

arrgh.. i almost sent u an email about the copyright thing kasam

i know u wrote it long time before

dat was awesome. havnt read new one these days? how u been?