good one galt!! I don't know whether this is your fiction or reality based, it touches hearts of people who have gone thru similar experience in real life. I had a similar kind of sister who used to call me 'dai' suddenly disappeared without notice when the proper time came. Damn puberty!! :-)
p.s. I hope it will not be tragedy like yours.
john,
great.......keep writing
Good lord.
God save you John. You're drowning in the very lake of creativity you've built.
Amazing piece!!
WAH!!!!!
.Deeply touched!
Thank you John .
John:
Great as usual. You left me almost in tears not because of what you wrote, but because of what you did not write and left for my imagination. I am not sure if you meant us to imagine what I did. Perhaps you meant to give us the freedom and the chains as well, as writers usually do.
Your amazing style aside, this write-up rekindled my gratefulness for groups like Maiti Nepal. Thanks again.
gr8 as always. running out of words to laude awesome writes and authors
Great!
I am in awe of your writing.
Keep up the good work.
some relationships don't crave for a mere title or a social recognition, yet they become more than just a mere relationship.
i could totally connect to what you went through while you're dispensing the ashes of the deceased one who you failed to rescue.
the story brought me to tears...the reality is so close to home....
some scars never fade
some hearts never mend
you try so hard to make it right
but as time slips through your fingers
all you can do is sit on a river bank
and wish that the smoke of your cigarrette
would take you back
xxx
NICE ONE dem smooth n carved with the heavenly words
loping it myan.......
I consider you as FIT n FINE too LOL....
nice weeken.....
Finally got to read it. I must say it is a very well written piece. The title, plot and ending all come together very well. Liked the style, tone and tenor you used in the story.
Best wishes.
John,
You report the crime on your own court and you sentence yourself to the pang of remorse to suffer all your life. What imperfection would it bring to her creation if she grants foresight to the good souls ? Is it lot to ask? Bless you.
John,
Nice story! awesome narration!
John, sad ain't it? But then we humans are never perfect.
very nice. These days whenever I check sajha I look for your piece. Great work keep writing.
On an even bigger picture....I think it's awesome that us Nepalis have some within our circle who have such amazing skills.
There's you john and Sum Off with exceptional writing skills.
Then there's a financial post started by Eminitrader- a guy with brilliant trading skills and I'm a regular contributor to his thread.
And I'm sure there are others involved in other fields who have a lot of contribution to make. I wish our leaders back home saw this. Maybe they'd feel ashamed at not building the proper infrastructure to lure budding talent to help the dormant, yet even more powerful force- which is sadly currently ploughing and fetching water all day long.
Keep it up John. Every time I read your stories, the more I learn about human nature.
Thank You!
Good one!! I really enjoyed reading it.. Ohh Poor Maya!!:-(
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Emotive words coalesced into an unfortunate turn of events in the story. Couldnt be any better than this, Galt!
Jhon Galt, I would say - Sir- John .
Wau ! you could be the inspirations of those writers who inspires others. You deserve a - salute-
We will be enjoying your future creation - article or the stories.
-BD
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