GALT - COMING TO AMERICA (A DETAILED VERSION)

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mansion

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Welcome

flip_flop

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Have nothing more to say than just exceptional writing!

Pretty

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As always enjoyed your writing John.

freak_alien

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good one john .... keep it coming !

Bob Dai

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Thank you for excellent read. I hardly miss out your articles.Thank you again.

thapap

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john. nice writing (O:

meera

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Sometimes the journey of "coming to Amrika" ends with reaching here. All the dreams that we bring with us and then come here and it ends with staying legal. I guess that's part of life, eh?

jhyalincha

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its still better than the alternative, isnt it?...do the sliding doors...what if you did not come to this land of dreams? what would you be doing back there at this very moment? good piece of writing though.

jira

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John~ your writing always resembles some part of my long lost memory. No wonder I enjoy your writing.

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john bro...:oD havent read it yet..but just seeing u shared some..me eyes are glittering(not gay ok!;oP hehe)my heart seems like its fluttering and all my senses seem a bit more heightened hehe and wat not?(did i say too much?i thot it was little :oS ;oP hehe) and yeah actually have an ass(ignment) to finish and which i shud be doin now for the past 2 hrs :o| hehe..so off to that again..but cheers for sharing and hope things are fine there :oD and the previous one u shared..im sure she be alright?:oD..as they say leopard might never change their spots..but they do take care of their own?;oP plus we aint talkin about a leopard are we?;oP hehe..tho its not mention im sure u know we are watchn...voyeurs we are?:oS and enjoyn immensely :oD...cheers for the pleasures re kya ;o) hehe..and definetly look foward for tonight when i be gettn more pleasure ;o) hehe..thanks to u of cos ;oP hehe good day!:oD

bokeshwore

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great. Now please we would wanna hear 2nd part. Please.

hyaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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liked it john! my itenary was pretty much the same and story not much different. are you still in the bay area? we could hang out if you are, go for the next raiders game or something. i know they are not that great, but hey they brought the big ben company down yesterday. have fun and do keep writing.

catch-22

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neat and vivid.you made me ponder and smile john. thank you so much.

Slackdemic

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Subtle, yet vivid.

sndy

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Really liked it..As usual, short and sweet !! Really enjoyed reading it..

lootekukur

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wow..what a heck of a narration! i always like the terseness of your anecdotes john...events just flow as swiftly as they can. which gel pen do you use, john? :P get 'em published...no seriously! LooTe

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