As always this one is also very good and enjoyed reading!!! Keep it up ~~~
John - Very nice . It's always a pleasure reading your stuff.
Dear John..
You are awesome writer ...feel like I'm knocking on heaven door... remind me my high school life with my ex friend...how you come up with this real world story...keep it up...
John, great story again.
What did you do with the candy bars after that? Any emotions if you had eaten them?
Dear all,
thanks for reading....
Dalli, thanks for reading my gibberish yet again.
gazer, the feeling is mutual...your narration is flawless.
neo - thanks, this story looks like a deja vu of million others.
chilpe - I had eaten it, even though me and my brother never really like candies. I cannnot recall the emotion as of now, but memories are eroded soon when you are a thirteen year old, I had overcome my repents.
jhon da;
best part of ur story is its originality and way u present ! ppl can relate to many things u say(narrate)!
meh---->not a good critic and bad at giving compliments . mostly enjoy being silent reader in most of the eminent writers of sajha.
just to let u know, i have enjoyed every single piece u gifted in sajha!its another one in hit list!
RuIna
jhon da;
best part of ur story is its originality and way u present ! ppl can relate to many things u say(narrate)!
meh---->not a good critic and bad at giving compliments . mostly enjoy being silent reader in most of the eminent writers of sajha.
just to let u know, i have enjoyed every single piece u gifted in sajha!its another one in hit list!
RuIna
oops! :s [arrgh! ]ignore pleech!:s
Now this brought a smile on my face... thanku... :)
John,
Wo 5 star candies ki kassam, apun ko story jhakas laga :)
Fill your days with smiles..
Good Job John, Nicely put !!!!
Ruina,
Been quite a while we had talked, although we do not run into each other very often, you are always in my thoughts, thanks for reading, your reply itself was one of the best compliments I had in days.
Ladyinred,
Thank you for reading, you made me smile too.
Bon jour Vantage,
thanks for being one of my closest ally. People like you encourage me to read. Apun ko aapki dosti ki kasam.
Alien,
Been sometime I had not seen you here, where were you at? Thanks for reading brother.
लौ यो त छुटिराको रेछ :)
अर्को साहित्यिक प्रहार भित्र सम्म पुग्ने!
लेख्दै जाउँ जोन जी, हामि छेउ मा छौँ तपाइँलाइ नियाल्दै!!
:)
Very smooth piece John.
". . . but if you want, I’ll try to love again
Baby, I’ll try to love again, but I know. . ."
Ha ha! Nice... nice.
"I finally got married to the woman I LOVED." ( No more? Nah! Just messing.)
By the way Shovana is married now. :).
Good day John!
IndisGuise:)
P.S: Was Sheela, Rani's cousin? :p
"akbari sooon lai kasi launu pardaina" so i will leave out the praise part.
Just dropped by to say that 5 star has been my fav. candy forever. People promise to bring some for me, but they easily break their promises. Some even threatened to eat it. And I completely forgot about it all together while back in KTM. Anyways, 5 star, Dairy Milk and gems, what a fantasy it was for children like us back then!!
झण्डै हाजिर र्न छुटेको!!!
हाजिर जोन सर!!!..:)
म हजुरको कलम सामु नतमस्तक छु!!!(अलि अलि कसि लाइदे'को के अक्बरि सुनलाइ!!!)...:)
Nirman~*
माइल्दाइ,
भित्र सम्म पुग्ने रे, जिस्क्याको हो कि क्या हो ? आफ्नो साहित्य को चाहिन कस्ले बयान गर्ने नी,त्यस्तो राम्रो लेख्नु हुन्छ ।
निर्माण्,
कता गायब माया मारेर भन्या ? अक्बारी सुन चाहिन होईन,यो त फलाम हो, सबै ले माया गरेर पो सुन जस्तो भा हो, यसो खाक्सी लाउन पर्यो ।
Indi,
oh brother where art thou?? thanks for completing the song...the scar is indeed deepest. My wife is a great fan of yours....keep writing more.
oys chill,
Long time no see...thanks for reminding me of gems, it was one of my favorites. I can send you some dairy milk ( Indian eestaiil ko) if you send me your address.
Mr. Galt, what an apt way to say " i love thee" to your wife. :)) And that too when V day is a week away. I do hope she reads your work.Truly, this is your best yet? Be good wud ya?
Miss O' hara,
Thanks for reminding me about my "D" day ( I call it "D" day cos someone babysits our daughter so we can have dinner together).
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