उजाड मेरो यो जिन्दगीमा
वाहार बनी नआउ कोहीपनि |
अन्धकार मेरो यो जीवनमा
बिहानी लिएर नआउ तिमिपनि |
लक्छ्य विहिन यात्रामा मेरो
साथ नदेउ कोहिपनि |
एक्लै हिड्न सिकिसके म
चाहिँदैन मलाई साथीपनि |
मायाको खेलमा बौलाहेको म
पागल संज्ञा नदेउ फेरीपनि |
बल्नु अघि नै निभिसके म
नजलाउ मलाई कोहिपनि |
नजलाउ मलाई कोहिपनि ||
-BR Akela
Last edited: 08-Nov-20 11:24 PM
Last edited: 08-Nov-20 11:42 PM
Nice attempt to copy
https://youtu.be/a5JwHML2eBs
Thanks wonton for helping me find the name of the poet. I saw this poem about 20-25 yrs ago in a nepali magazine. I did not know the song. Music is bad compared to words in that song
Last edited: 09-Nov-20 01:49 PM
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