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   To you, Dilasha, for your grilling ema 01-Aug-03 Nepe
     Wah wah! Wah wah!! My best lines Aun 01-Aug-03 noname
       <br> Thank you, Noname ji. Aba ta Wah w 03-Aug-03 Nepe
         Ramro cha Kabi ji. Cliché ta hoina Cl 03-Aug-03 Qallu
           I am prepared to be hanged for cliche-is 03-Aug-03 SITARA
             Qallu ji, Thank you. Yes, I meant Cli 03-Aug-03 Nepe
               Nepe ji, Uta Gokul dai ko * to whom it 03-Aug-03 vivid
                 hmm... dui tin din birai sajha ma pasda 03-Aug-03 Gunaraj
                   WOWWWWWW 03-Aug-03 storm
                     When it comes to Gajals, I am truely Nep 03-Aug-03 Bhunte
                       Sitara, Salaam, hajur ko sadbhavana l 04-Aug-03 Nepe
                         nepe daju, what a beautiful Gazal....bra 04-Aug-03 hangu lama
                           Nepe ji, Narisaunus hai, Jhari, ghaa 04-Aug-03 vivid
                             Vivid, Ke ko risaunu ni, teti ramro s 04-Aug-03 Nepe
                               Nepe ji, Thanks! Can you just enlighte 04-Aug-03 vivid
                                 <br> Vivid, I ain't know nothing 'bout 04-Aug-03 Nepe
                                   Nepe ji, we are awaiting Dilasa's rep 04-Aug-03 Bhunte
                                     Nepe ji, It was just to clear my confus 04-Aug-03 vivid
                                       <br> Vivid, I am not lying. When Saj 04-Aug-03 Nepe
Nepe ji, So, autai dyang ko mula pare j 04-Aug-03 vivid
   Finally, I got a mail. But, alas, it was 04-Aug-03 Nepe
     Nepe hajur, Badhai chha for the BLANK 05-Aug-03 Bhunte
       Bhunte ji, Thank you for your interpr 05-Aug-03 Nepe
         . 06-Aug-03 Nepe
           Nepe hajur, asaddhhe ramro chha hajur 06-Aug-03 Bhunte
             Nepe ji, Hajur ko kabita padesi malai p 06-Aug-03 vivid
               My oh my I am just speechless!! Hmmm. 06-Aug-03 Dilasha
                 Btw, the last nepali ghazal (with the ye 06-Aug-03 Dilasha
                   Nepe dai, I have sent you the link to y 06-Aug-03 hangu lama
                     "Ek pal kati laamo huncha Tirkha boki p 06-Aug-03 KaLaNkiStHan
                       Dilasha, Bahot der kardi huzur aate a 07-Aug-03 Nepe
                         "Dair aaye par doorust aaye" ni nepe ji! 07-Aug-03 Dilasha
                           Nepe hajur, Feri pani hajur ko tarif 07-Aug-03 Bhunte
                             Jhyaure Gazal Nepe jyu!! aaaaaaaaanch!! 07-Aug-03 KaLaNkIsThAn
                               hey guys and gals listen musik and sl 07-Aug-03 kaluram
                                 Kalanki, Yo ta sab bhanne kura ho ! 08-Aug-03 Nepe
                                   Ee Hajoor, Hamilai ta ramita chha... ram 08-Aug-03 Harris
                                     udas cha yo maan timi tadha bhai diyeko 08-Aug-03 yoUnGbLooDZ
                                       timro aankha ma herera afno tasbir kojhd 08-Aug-03 yoUnGbLooDZ
chahanchu ma timro sath na chutos kahile 08-Aug-03 yoUnGbLooDZ
   jado mahina ko nadi jastai sunsan ta cha 09-Aug-03 yoUnGbLooDZ
     <a href=http://www.nephop.com target=_b 10-Aug-03 nepzkilla


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Nepe Posted on 01-Aug-03 05:55 PM


To you, Dilasha, for your grilling email..



noname Posted on 01-Aug-03 06:10 PM

Wah wah! Wah wah!!

My best lines
Aunsi ko aangan ma tara chhardaichhu
malai dasne Jun taha taha napokha

By the way,
yo dah ma kaha lagera bisau
binti biraha napokha, napokha

ke parechha ni tyasto?!



Nepe Posted on 03-Aug-03 02:32 PM


Thank you, Noname ji. Aba ta Wah wah paauna ra 'thank you' bhanna pani sochnu parne jasto chha. Cliché bhanidelan bhanne dar !

Anyway, that line is my favorite too. Makes me aghast every time I read.

>ke parechha ni tyasto?!

Well, let's leave some for Dilasha too. She might identify it. :)

*********

I don't think my readers will have any difficulty to understand the lines. Nevertheless, I am giving the meaning of some words, just in case.

baha = anguish
gaha = tearful eye
tahataha = a mimic word for the moonlight at an eerie night
saha = affluence. Compare Anikal/sahakal
daah = pang, ache
Qallu Posted on 03-Aug-03 02:54 PM

Ramro cha Kabi ji.

Cliché ta hoina Clique chain huna sakcha... heram aba. Dilasha le ke bhancha.

Je hos, Dilasha ko email must have been very anguished that it inspired yasto outpouring.

SITARA Posted on 03-Aug-03 03:12 PM

I am prepared to be hanged for cliche-ism:

I do declare unabashedly, unashamedly and deliberately that I am one ardent fan of the Nepe Fanclub!!!

If truth be damned, then, I am one damned dame!!!

Nepe ji;

aati ramro!
Nepe Posted on 03-Aug-03 03:15 PM

Qallu ji,

Thank you. Yes, I meant Clique. My bad.

To be honest, this is a recycled ghazal. But it came handy for the moment. Sorry Dilasha, if you did not like that.
vivid Posted on 03-Aug-03 03:27 PM

Nepe ji,
Uta Gokul dai ko * to whom it may concern* padesi sarakauna alik kata kata apthyaro lagera Maunata mai purnata paune koshis gardai chu! :)
Gunaraj Posted on 03-Aug-03 03:45 PM

hmm... dui tin din birai sajha ma pasda khisrikka parera pharkanu pareko chhaina
storm Posted on 03-Aug-03 04:54 PM

WOWWWWWW
Bhunte Posted on 03-Aug-03 06:54 PM

When it comes to Gajals, I am truely Nepe's fan....yo Gajal padhda ta kasko dil napaglera ta...

Ani mero khet ma dhan ropain ko lagi khetalni ko kam chhaina ni hajur.. Bause ra Khetalni ko hilo chyapa chhyap sanga dohari gajal pani janechha ......ehehe
Nepe Posted on 04-Aug-03 03:18 PM

Sitara,

Salaam, hajur ko sadbhavana laai !


Vivid,

Maunata hulaaki pani ho. Sandesh paayen hajur ko.

Guna,

It's been long since you shared your last sweet ghazal. Pratixarat chhu arko ghazal-putra ko janma-divas ko !

Storm,

You came like a storm and went back like a storm. Thank you, hajur.

Bhunte,

Ropain ko kura chalyo, euta thap sher- although in a very different tone; a prayer in the tone of Jagajit Singh's 'Garaj baras pyasi dharti par..'

Jhari, ghaam, pasinaa jatti deu, prabhu !
Mero khet-ma bas salaha napokha
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hangu lama Posted on 04-Aug-03 03:53 PM

nepe daju, what a beautiful Gazal....bravo!
I have already made a tune for it. Do you mind if i record the gazal and post it here at sajha?? I think it has a good tune to it.
vivid Posted on 04-Aug-03 04:15 PM

Nepe ji,
Narisaunus hai,

Jhari, ghaam, pasinaa aruko pokhiye saraha, Pravu
Mero khetma saha, laha laha pokha!

:)
Nepe Posted on 04-Aug-03 04:51 PM

Vivid,

Ke ko risaunu ni, teti ramro sher banaunu bhayo !

I really liked it. Kunai din purai ghazal lekhnu hunchha, if have not already, bhanne bishwas chha malaai.

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Hangu Bhai,

I have sent an email to you.
vivid Posted on 04-Aug-03 04:55 PM

Nepe ji,
Thanks!
Can you just enlighten me what is the difference about Chok and haiku??
I just remembered Bikram Subba who was once a famous chok kabi.
All I know is Chok is a very short version of poem.
Waiting in earnest!
Nepe Posted on 04-Aug-03 05:08 PM


Vivid, I ain't know nothing 'bout Chok. Sorry to disappoint you, but my reading is really really limited. :(
Bhunte Posted on 04-Aug-03 05:11 PM

Nepe ji,

we are awaiting Dilasa's reply to your beautifully crafted Gajal dedicated to her.....
vivid Posted on 04-Aug-03 05:25 PM

Nepe ji,
It was just to clear my confusions. Anyway, sahitya chetra ma hajur ko reading limited bhanne ho bhane hamro ta kokro mai bhannu parla jasto cha jhan, :((
Nepe Posted on 04-Aug-03 05:58 PM


Vivid,

I am not lying. When Sajhaites discuss about the books they read, malaai ta laajai laagchha :(


Bhunte ji,

Tehi ta. Aba sochdai chhu,

Qaashid ke aate aate, khat ekk aur likh rakhu
mai janta hun woh kya likhenge jawab me


qaashid= messenger
vivid Posted on 04-Aug-03 06:16 PM

Nepe ji,
So, autai dyang ko mula pare jastai chaun ni ta uso bhaye, ;-)
Kitab ko nam ma course books bhanda para aru kehi padna ta ke najarpan garna pani muskeel afulai ta, :(

Na rahar, na jangaar, na harsha, na bismat,
Kewal akangkipanmai bitdo chha harek din ani sajh!

Haus ta, Maunata ko avash lina tira lagnu paryo aba, :-)
Nepe Posted on 04-Aug-03 09:07 PM

Finally, I got a mail. But, alas, it was a blank message ! Here is a small poem to that.


Your Blank Message


Not like a night
With pre-positioned stars and moon
Or with the sun borne sky
Sometime at the noon

It was rather like a dawning sky
Fresh, clear, silent and quiet
Or tranquil, relaxing, waiting
For something- like a twilight

A calm sea in the morning
A gentle breeze can pass by any moment
Or how about that garden
Where bloomed only the scent

It is a picture from an empty canvas
Some reasons had to make it invisible
Left to be touched by a dream's eye
And to be hanged on a heart's isle

It is a No with no 'No'
It is a Yes with no 'Yes'
It is an end without end
It is a beginning without a preface

It is a silence that has swallowed a thousand sounds!

Beloved you !
I found a thousand words
In your blank message
All I had to do was
To stop trying to apprehend and
To be content with
Just feeling them

Thank you!

Bhunte Posted on 05-Aug-03 12:08 AM

Nepe hajur,

Badhai chha for the BLANK email....I would have also done same if I was her...

If you read Nepali "dantya katha", in one story there is a Princess who cover her face with her shining dark long hair and rips the back of her 'Choli', which means the Princess is suggesting the Prince to come in using the back door after dark. In the same vein Dilasha's blank e-mail I interpret as her Dil (heart) is empty and there is enough space for you to accomodate only you. So fill up her Dil as much as u can writing full of sweet whispers...

Best wishes Nepe hajur...
Nepe Posted on 05-Aug-03 07:36 AM

Bhunte ji,

Thank you for your interpretation.

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Before it goes any further, I should make two disclaimers. First, I am not sure yet if it is Dilasha who sent me a blank message. Second, the poem was lifted from somewhere with the consent of the poet who happens to be my Jigari dost. I will welcome any comments, criticism and wah wah to the poem though, and I promise to pass them to the kabi ji himself. This should not lessen the fun. Because what's in name, No ? It's the story that matters.
Nepe Posted on 06-Aug-03 04:01 PM

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Bhunte Posted on 06-Aug-03 04:24 PM

Nepe hajur, asaddhhe ramro chha hajur

Dilasa, pls say something....
vivid Posted on 06-Aug-03 05:32 PM

Nepe ji,
Hajur ko kabita padesi malai pani lekham lekham lagera try gareko matrai hai,

Sunyatako akritee,
Kelayera hernu,
Maunatako bibechana,
Ooth haruma padnu,

Ghumto uthai nayanka,
Andhyaroma chiyaunu,
Mero bhav pokhiyechan,
Kanika jhain tipnu,

Pari banma dadelo go,
Sable dekhne bho,
Mero manko dadelo,
Kasle dekhne ho?

Astaundo tyo ghamko lali,
Bidai mangdai gayo,
Bholi puna aunchu bhani,
Kasam khandai gayo!

Dalisha ji, where art thou???
Dilasha Posted on 06-Aug-03 07:03 PM

My oh my I am just speechless!!

Hmmm......what can I say except that I am again mesmerized by the simple yet beautiful words of Nepe ji who never ceases to enthrall us with his poetic gift and of course a bit dumfounded to know that my email was the source of inspiration(?) What was so grilling about it that beckoned you to dedicate such a special ghazal to me I wonder but without further feelings of bewilderment, let me tell you Nepe ji, that you ARE the essence of Sajhas existence and it is only through your ghazals that it continues to shine. Some people write when they are up some do when theyre down and out but you seem to BREATHE those very words that touch us so deeply that they transcend us to a different level of awareness. Such is the charisma, the true essence of the poet in you, which I pray never dies-our very own quintessential Ghalib that you are!

*****
Nepe ji, (pardon my grammatical errors but I couldn't think of better words to express my gratitude)

Adaa karti hoon shukriya is naadir tohfe ke liye
Rakhoongi apne paas tanhaain mein saath paane ke liye

woh alfaaz hain ya phulon ki khushboo?
jaise koi dastaan inmein chupi hui ho
jaise koi dar-e-yaar kahin khuli hui ho

aap shayar hain ya saahir?
Jo bhi ho khuda ki qasam aap Be nazir ho!
Dilasha Posted on 06-Aug-03 07:13 PM

Btw, the last nepali ghazal (with the yellow background) is a classic! I even tried to sing it with my own tune. You must collaborate with a musician and I bet it'll make a memorable song. Wot say you nepe ji?
hangu lama Posted on 06-Aug-03 09:37 PM

Nepe dai,
I have sent you the link to your song that i recorded. Let me know what you think, so that we can feature the song here. I had fun working with the song.
hangulama
KaLaNkiStHan Posted on 06-Aug-03 10:30 PM

"Ek pal kati laamo huncha
Tirkha boki paani kurda"

hmmmm....! Nepe hazur!! Where is your right leg? Khuttai dhokna mann laagyo...! Chela sela banauna milcha bhane dakshina uthauna kaam garna jaanu paryo.... dishwashing... yesssssssss.! SUPERB (your kabita)!!

I tried to hum it on my tune like dilasha did, and it works great in rupak taal... aru pani jaawosh.

Okay, the only thing I know the most is that I want to KNOW.

what are these kinds of gazals called, where the end part of the second line is identical..?
I like these kind of stuffs the most... hazur.... do you have anything like this in your collection, where they have identicle piece through out the song...? cha bhane chaapum na tyasto piece haru. Don't worry about what it is called though.
kinda like;

Jindagi tune lahu le ke diya, kuch bhi nahi
Tere daaman main mere waaste kyaa kuch bhi nahi

Dil bhi ik jid pe ada hain kisi bachchae ki tarah
ya to sab kuch hi ishe chaahiye ya kuch bhi nahi

mere haathon ki chaaho to talaasi le le
mere haathon main lakeeron ke siba kuch bhi nahi

curious...;)
Nepe Posted on 07-Aug-03 02:55 PM

Dilasha,

Bahot der kardi huzur aate aate..

Thank you for showing up. That's all I had longed for. I don't know however can I reply to your generous compliments to the poet in me. I promise I will not let him die. He won't. His fate is sealed by Ghalib,

hazaaroN KHwahishaiN 'eisee ke har KHwahish pe dam nikle
bohot nikle mere armaaN lekin phir bhee kam nikle

And thank you for that encouraging advice. I hope my songs get discovered !

*******************
Vivid,

Sunyatako akritee...., maunata ko bibechana.. hmmm I did it in 'Your Blank Message', didn't I ?

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Hangu Bhai,

You got my mail today, didn't you ?

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Kalanki,

Aba ma bharkhar Bhunte ko ropaain sakera aaudaichhu, yo hilo godama ke ko dhogai bho ra ?

Ae phuchche ki aa'n khoi ek lota pani le le ya'n bahira, haat-goda dhunu paryo. Sharaa'ta hamra kalanki babu pani aa'ran. Jhyaure-ghazal sikchhu bhanchhan. Khai tyo lisno muni'a khopaa'ta mero kaapi ko mutho ni nikalde. Musa le dhulo pitho po paadi sake ki !

Phuchche ki aama bhitrai baat: Hana kuni ke jati Sajhaa'n chhapya chhu bhantheu ta timra khai kat'yauda shilak ta. Ahile tesai le kaam chalaaye hunna ?

Lau jaso bhanchhes budhi. La kalanki babu, euta ghazal bhattyauchhu sajha baatai nikalera, la sunam.


Dilasha Posted on 07-Aug-03 05:34 PM

"Dair aaye par doorust aaye" ni nepe ji! pls keep on adding more to the khazana so that we all can be enriched.

btw, here's a dedication to you-written by none other than GULZAR.

qadam usii mo.D par jame hai.n
nazar sameTe hue kha.Daa huu.N
junuu.N ye majabuur kar rahaa hai palaT ke dekhuu.N
Khudii ye kahatii hai mo.D mu.D jaa
agarche ehasaas kah rahaa hai
khule dariiche ke piichhe do aa.Nkhe.n jhaa.Nkatii hai.n

abhii mere intazaar me.n vo bhii jaagatii hai
kahii.n to us ke goshaa-e-dil me.n dard hogaa
use ye zid hai ki mai.n pukaaruu.N
mujhe taqaazaa hai vo bulaa le
qadam usii mo.D par jame hai.n
nazar samete hue kha.Daa huu.N
Bhunte Posted on 07-Aug-03 06:24 PM

Nepe hajur,

Feri pani hajur ko tarif nagari basna sakina naya gajal ko lagi....ma ta tyo mriga nayeni dekhera bhutukkai bhaye ni ammma ma....hajur calculus ko partial derivative ko hisab pani garna janne ekdam sipalu keto jasto lagyo...

ani Ooha ta hajur ko tapasya dekhi prasanna bhayera prakat hunda ta malai tyo Sindur film ko Chankhe-Nakkali ko geet ko yad ayo malai---

"Anye baba aye,
lauchhu maya pirat....
titi titi titi ti titi titi ti" ....

ehehehe
KaLaNkIsThAn Posted on 07-Aug-03 07:58 PM

Jhyaure Gazal Nepe jyu!!
aaaaaaaaanch!!!

"Tarkiyera bhagna khojhyo, jhanai chiplinchu sulululululu timro aankha ma"
Tell me about those karke aankha haru ko bhakha, hazurrr!!!
Ti aankha haru le nai malai baulaa banaune bho!!

Gazal sochnu paryo pachi aafulai Jworo aaucha. Tution lina jaam bhane yo budheshkaal ma ke padhaai bho... Baru euta 'geet' ma pani chaapi dinchu...

written by "Kaali Prasaad Rijal"

Timra laagi jyaan dinchu, timi mero MANN KO RAJA
Sangai jiune Sangai marne, hamro chokho chokho naata
YO TA SAAB BHANNE KURA NA HO.

Kaslai fursad huncha yahan kohi aruko baare sochne
Aaafno khushi metaayera Kohi Aruko PEEER bokne
Timilai dinchu fulai fula ma ta LINCHU KAADAI KAADA
YO TA SAAB BHANNE KURA NA HO.

Suru ma ta baacha baandhi aakash ko TARA JHARCHAN
Jaba milcha mahal ani JHUPRO lai maya marchan
Hamro Milan NISHWARTHA cha Jooni Jooni ko yo saatha
YO TA SAAB BHANNE KURA NA HO.

Phuchche ki aamai lai darshan hai hazurr.. ;)

Dilasha, nice one ;)
kaluram Posted on 07-Aug-03 09:14 PM

hey guys and gals listen musik and sleep like this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nepe Posted on 08-Aug-03 11:25 AM

Kalanki,

Yo ta sab bhanne kura ho !

Really moved me. Very disturbing !

**************
Bhunte ji,

Calculus ? Ascol ma ek semester padhiya thyo, kahile polera khaisakiyo !

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Kaluram ji,

Funny and informative ! Hehehe..But, are you sure you wanted to post these pics in this thread ?

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Dilasha,

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Harris Posted on 08-Aug-03 12:05 PM

Ee Hajoor, Hamilai ta ramita chha... ramailo bha'chha.. asal asal sher-shayari, geet-ghazal padhna paiya chha.... hajoor haruko chain paryo ki kaso? "Pirati ko lamo dori kase jasto chha......" Good luck hajoor haru lai..
yoUnGbLooDZ Posted on 08-Aug-03 12:13 PM

udas cha yo maan timi tadha bhai diyeko le
birano cha yo maan timi maan ko najik nabhayeko le
socheko thiye timi aaunchau mero najik yo mero mayale
tara bujhna sakenau mero yo mayalai timi nishturi le


yb -- damn i ain't that baad.. (just made it mahself ahhahahaha)
yoUnGbLooDZ Posted on 08-Aug-03 12:21 PM

timro aankha ma herera afno tasbir kojhdai chu ma
timro aankha ma herera afno tasbir kojdai chu ma
timro maya ma dubera afno jindagi kojdai chu ma

paune le ta kojhera bhagwan pani pai sakyo
paune le ta kojhera bhagwan pani pai sakyo
tara timro aankha ma mero lagi maya kojda kojdai jindagi dubna lai skayo


adab adab


yb



yoUnGbLooDZ Posted on 08-Aug-03 12:28 PM

chahanchu ma timro sath na chutos kahile pani
chahanchu ma timro maya kahile na ruthos ma parti

timro maya nai ta ho mero jiban ko sahara
timro sahara nai ho mero jindagi ko bachne adhara..
nachutos kahile timro tyo sath
yesari nai rahos hamro maya ra jiban sath sath


adab adab

yb ---- yesko topic chahi .. -HAMRO SATH- rakhe kasto hola

yoUnGbLooDZ Posted on 09-Aug-03 10:28 AM

jado mahina ko nadi jastai sunsan ta cha yo jindagi
tara na samjhinu ki aaundaina yo mero jindagi ma barkha ko jasto tyo bari
timile chadi gayeu ta ke bho ra
sayed hola yo sansar ma arko kunai timi bhanda sundar pari



nepzkilla Posted on 10-Aug-03 07:30 AM

www.nephop.com if u want to listen to musik. jus.. go here... nephop.com peace out..